Monday, February 4, 2013

At the hardware store...



January 31, 2013

Hello, writers,

Fourteen writers shared their writing on Tuesday evening at the Callahan library. 
One visitor attended.  Please welcome Chuck L. to the group!

Here’s what happened…
We started the workshop with a choice of warm-up exercises.  I’ll list them here in case you want to do them this week:
            Choose one of the following and write for 10 minutes:
1.                   Describe your favorite artist and a few of his/her works. 
2.                   Describe your life as food.  Is it salty, sweet or something else?
3.                   Write a scene with dialogue between a student and a teacher.
4.                   Complete a free-write on anything

After a few members read their warm-ups, we introduced ourselves, shared information and began the critiques.  

Good News and Information Exchange…
Betty C. and her book, “Be Lifted Up,” were featured in a piece published in The Florida Baptist Witness.  Read the story here:  http://www.gofbw.com/News.asp?ID=14730.  Great article, Betty!

Lynn R. has reached chapter 10 in her novel. Way to go, Lynn!  Very impressive!

I (Nancy) submitted a group of poems to a literary journal.  I don’t know if they’ll be published, but I’m happy I sent them in for review.  

Overview of critiques...
Connie K. started by reading another installment of “Emily’s Secrets.”  Connie’s descriptions worked well as did the suspense she created about Emily’s secrets.  I (Nancy B.) then read, “The Party,” a piece of fiction about a man who works in a hardware store and a woman who is planning a party. 

Lisa C. shared a poem called “Hardware Heartthrob.”  The story her poem told and the rhymes she used worked.  Sandra H. then read her version of a Facebook chat about hardware stores.  Her use of multiple characters and dialogue was cleverly done.    

Matt Y. read a piece offering a glimpse inside the mind of an ‘artist.’  His characterization worked well.  Lynn R. shared a prologue of her novel.  The piece offered a well-researched retrospective of the 1970s.

Chad A. continued by sharing a short piece written from the perspective of a product on the shelf of a hardware store.  His piece garnered many interpretations ranging from jail to death.  Connie W. then read a poem about a lady named Flo who heads to the hardware store for a lamp.  While there, she sees so many products, she forgets to purchase the lamp.

Karen D. then shared a piece set inside a hardware store called Cowford’s.  Members thought her inclusion of the cat worked.  Oliver M. then read a short riddle-like piece written as an acrostic for TRUST.  His parallel structure and strong verbs worked.

Cameron S. continued by reading a piece set in a hardware store.  Her circling back to the needed light bulb at the end worked well.  Christine R. then read “This Too Shall Pass.”  In it, Vanessa heads to the hardware store to pick up items her soon-to-be ex-husband requested.  While there, she meets Eric who encourages her.  With realistic dialogue and a good story line, her piece worked.  

Heike M. finished the critiques by sharing her Stonehenge piece.  Her skillful use of the neutral observer caused us all to be curious about the speaker of the piece.  NOTE:  I neglected to ask Heike if she wanted to say anything after reading her piece.  I apologize, Heike.  Next week, I’ll remedy this by starting with Heike’s comments at the beginning of the critique session.

Links of interest…

The Amelia Island Book Festival is coming up soon.  CCWW member, Lori L., asked if any CCWW’ers want to carpool to the event.
More information here…http://ameliaislandbookfestival.com/

Southern Writers Magazine sponsors Short Story Contest
Deadline:  March 1
Entry Fee:  Free
Theme:  Any family-friendly topic will work

Parable Press is open to submissions
“A place to air your literary laundry”

J. Taylor Publishing is seeking YA (Young Adult) stories between 5,000 and 10,000 words based on a prompt about time stopping…
Deadline:  March 6, 2013

Adventure Publications, an award-winning publisher of outdoor guides, is accepting fiction manuscripts for its new series of outdoor/wilderness mysteries. We are looking for mystery fiction that will appeal to both the mystery reader and the outdoors enthusiast. The books will be produced in print and ebook formats. Examples of authors we love are Nevada Barr, Victoria Houston, C.J. Box, William Kent Krueger and Beth Groundwater. Currently, we are seeking novels set in the Midwest, Southwest, Northwest, Northeast and Rocky Mountains.

Prompt for next week…
Prompt for next week is…Victorian.  You’re free to write in any genre you like (poetry, non-fiction, fiction or drama).  If you’d rather bring a WIP (work-in-progress), please do.  

Please bring something to share with the group.

Until Tuesday, February 5, happy writing!
~Nancy

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