Thursday, February 21, 2013

Curiosity Killed the Cat...



February 21, 2013

Hello, writers,

Twelve writers met at the Callahan library Tuesday evening.  The pieces ranged from poetry to fiction.  Many of us chose to write on the “curiosity killed the cat” prompt. 

Please note CCWW will not meet on Tuesday, February 26 and Tuesday, March 5.  Our second six-week session will run from Tuesday, March 12 through Tuesday, April 16.

Here’s what happened…

We started the workshop with a choice of warm-up exercises.  I’ll list them here in case you want to do them at home...

Choose one of the following prompts and write for ten minutes:
1.                  A myth explaining some natural phenomenon
2.                  Your childhood crush(es)
3.                  Your experience with sports or athletics
4.                  A free-write on anything

After a few members read their warm-ups, we introduced ourselves, shared information and began the critiques.  

Good News and Information Exchange…

CCWW is planning a Publication Party for Tuesday, April 16. In addition to eating yummy food, we’re preparing at least one publication-ready piece for submission to a magazine, a newspaper, an agent or a publisher.  Members may wish to start researching markets now.  Each CCWW-er will choose his or her piece and a publication.  Of course, it’s up to CCWW members to figure out the submission guidelines for the chosen publication-some ask for query letters while others ask for sample pages. 

Members are encouraged to submit more than one piece!  I’ll bring a few market research resources beginning in March.  Are you up to the challenge?

We gave writers a three-part assignment Tuesday night.  It is due when we return from break on Tuesday, March 12.   The three-part assignment is as follows:

1.       Select your piece(s).                                              
2.       Edit and revise your piece(s).
3.       Begin researching writing markets matching genre, tone, subject matter, etc. of your piece(s).

Don’t know where to start?  Try looking at the “Links of Interest” section on past CCWW blog posts.  I’ll be at the Callahan library on Tuesday, March 5 from 6pm until 7:30pm to help anyone who may have questions.  I have some market listings for writers.

Overview of critiques...

Shirley A. started the session by reading two humorous poems based on the prompt.  Her rhymes, such as “Georgia” and “check forg-a” worked!  Robert O. then shared a piece in which two siblings argued.  His vivid descriptions, such as “bright silver with rage” worked.  Oliver M. then read “Gift,” a short piece he penned in 2011.  Many CCWW members thought he skillfully showed how life is a gift.

I (Nancy B.) then continued “The Party,” a short story I started with the hardware store prompt a few weeks ago.  Members told me they enjoyed the way the story is unfolding.  Lisa C. then read “Lights Out,” a humorous short story about a woman who spies on her neighbors at night.  Her characterization worked.  Karen D. continued the session by sharing “Bobby, the Bob-Tailed Cat.”  Her piece garnered laughs as she described Bobby becoming a “warrior” cat.  

Michele N. read a piece about a middle-aged woman risking online dating.  Many members commented on the sense of suspense she created.  Lori L. then shared “Lesson of the Light.”  Her piece offered readers and listeners encouragement about God seeing our hearts.   Matt Y. then read a piece featuring a taxi driver who helps a woman in distress.  Turns out, the woman and her assailant come after the cab driver instead.  Nice twist, Matt!

Connie K. continued the critique session by reading more of “Emily’s Secrets.”  Her piece relayed the insecurities a young girl felt inviting her friend over.  Cameron S. then shared a piece featuring a girl who had been kidnaped then rescued by her brother.  She has amnesia, and she’s trying to regain her memory.  Connie W. finished the session with a piece featuring the Curiosity Rover on Mars.  After bringing a Martian cat back to Earth, “Satisfaction” must return the animal to its home planet.  

Wonderful work, everyone!

Links of interest…

Poetry
Here’s a database of literary magazines seeking poetry.  Many of them pay.  More here:http://www.pw.org/literary_magazines

Fiction
Since many of us write fiction, here’s a directory of 30 short story markets.  More here:http://www.writersdigest.com/writing-articles/by-writing-goal/get-published-sell-my-work/get_inside_the_top_30_short_story_markets

Personal Essays
Here’s a list of paying markets for personal essays.  More here:  http://www.writingtoheal.com/markets.html

Pet Markets
Some of you are interested in writing for pet magazines.  Check out this article with links:  http://www.writing-world.com/freelance/pets.shtml

Assignment for March 12…

In case you didn’t see it above, here’s the first part of the assignment for our March 12 meeting.  I’ll list it again here: 
1.       Select your piece(s)                                       
2.       Edit and revise your piece(s).
3.       Begin researching writing markets matching genre, tone, subject matter, etc. of your piece(s)

Until Tuesday, March 12, happy writing!
~Nancy

Thursday, February 14, 2013

Stamps



February 14, 2013

Hello, writers,

Happy Valentine’s Day!  Fifteen of us met at the Callahan library on Tuesday evening to share our creative writing.      

Please note CCWW will not meet on Tuesday, February 26 and Tuesday, March 5.  Our second six-week session will run from Tuesday, March 12 through Tuesday, April 16.

Here’s what happened…
We started the workshop with a choice of warm-up exercises.  I’ll list them here in case you want to do them at home:

    Choose one of the following prompts and write for ten minutes…
1.                  Taxi cabs
2.                  Valentine’s Day-the good, the bad, the ugly
3.                  A battle among knives, forks and spoons
4.                  A free-write on anything

After a few members read their warm-ups, we introduced ourselves, shared information and began the critiques.  

Good News and Information Exchange…

CCWW is planning a Publication Party for Tuesday, April 16. In addition to eating yummy food, we’re preparing at least one publication-ready piece for submission to a magazine, a newspaper, an agent or a publisher.  Members may wish to start researching markets now.  Each CCWW-er will choose his or her piece and a publication.  Of course, it’s up to CCWW members to figure out the submission guidelines for the chosen publication-some ask for query letters while others ask for sample pages.  Members are encouraged to submit more than one piece!  I’ll bring a few market research resources beginning in March.  Are you up to the challenge?

Connie W. is taking a free online philosophy course through Course Ra.  Check out course offerings here:  https://www.coursera.org/.  Way to go, Connie!

Lisa C. has been tapped to lead the Creative Writing Club for middle and high school students at Sonshine Christian Academy in Callahan.  Great job, Lisa!

Lori L. told us she just got a new job!  Yay, Lori!

Michele N. has been successfully editing college entrance essays for a high school senior.  Her work is paying off because the student has been accepted to several colleges, including the University of Florida.  Nice work, Michele!

Oliver M. was featured in a “Working on the First Coast” article in The Florida Times-Union.  The article showcases the antiques shop he and his father own.  Read the article here:  http://members.jacksonville.com/business/premium-business/2013-02-13/story/working-first-coast-collecter-doesnt-want-be-called

Overview of critiques...

Lori L. started by reading a thoughtful piece featuring women characters. Her vivid details (such as the scent of chicken) and her powerful verbs (such as –peered, -perched and –migrated) worked well.  I (Nancy B.) then read a continuation of “The Party,” a short story I started with the hardware store prompt a few weeks ago.  Members said the weaving between past and present worked in the piece.  Matt Y. then shared a piece written as a sales pitch.  His humorous piece informed readers about an upcoming meeting for an anarchist group called STAMPS (Stop the American Machine’s Political System).      

Oliver M.  then shared a piece written as a riddle.  CCWW’ers tried unsuccessfully to figure out the answer.  It was about a clubhouse.  Cameron S. then read a piece featuring a character named Cereal Boy.  Her well-written story captured many members’ imaginations.  Robert O. then read a continuation of the piece he began with the “Stonehenge” prompt.  His portrayal of family connections as well as the coming-of-age nature of the piece worked, according to many members. 

Lisa C. continued the critique session by reading “The Pot and the Kettle,” a story showcasing a humorous argument (over stamps) between a husband and a wife.  Her characterization of Margaret and Henry and her story’s resolution worked well. Christine R. then shared a piece featuring a woman dealing with the loss of her father.  The setting of her piece worked well.

Heike M. then read a crime-scene piece.  Her balance of narration and dialogue and her syntax worked well.  Connie K. then shared a continuation of “Emily’s Secrets.”  Connie’s ability to “show, not tell” was evident in her descriptions.  Shirley A. then read a slice of life piece showing what grandmothers go through when they keep grandchildren.  Her piece offered many insights.  Sandra H. then read “The Funeral,” in which a teenage boy must say goodbye to his grandmother.  Her skillful writing produced an emotional punch in the reader/listener.  

Connie W. finished the session by reading a piece in which a wife must use food stamps at the grocery store.  Her piece caused many of us to consider the assumptions we make about people every day.   

Betty C. and Michele N. did not read pieces.      

Links of interest…

Here’s an index of flash fiction markets.   As you may know, flash fiction is short (usually up to 1000 words).  Read more here:  http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=59234

Ready to start researching markets for our Publication Party?  Try this comprehensive database featuring paying and non-paying markets in a variety of genres:  http://www.writerswrite.com/writersguidelines/

Here’s an article featuring 15 paying markets for life stories and personal essays.  Maybe you’ll find a match for one of your pieces here:  http://www.writing-world.com/creative/fifteen.shtml

Prompt for next week…

Prompt for next week is…curiosity killed the cat.  You’re free to write in any genre you like (poetry, non-fiction, fiction or drama).  If you’d rather bring a WIP (work-in-progress), please do.  

Please bring something to share with the group.

Until Tuesday, February 19, happy writing!

~Nancy

Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Meeting tonight

I am looking forward to seeing everyone at CCWW tonight.  I'm going to finish up my "stamps" piece now. 

~Nancy

Monday, February 11, 2013

"The Sleeping King" by Robert Oxfurth

The Sleeping King

Wake, O Sleeping King, know ye not that the hour be late?
 
But what thou says, awake I am! The sleepless king is more fitting for me.

Nay, oh slave of Hypnos, asleep thou stay! Though I try to roost.
In a darkness deep within is where thou slumbers, O Leader of Men.
Thou was once a great warrior of the field, a regal fighter upon a hill.
Until into a pit thou fell, and a dreamless rest began its spell.

How dare thou speaks to me this way? Thy ask as ye is gripped with rage.
A king I be! Thou should honor me! Ye scream, trying to instill fear in me.

What right have thee to wear that crown so proudly upon thy brow?

By right of my name! You reply so vain, as if the answer should be plain.
 
Wrong again, O Royal One! ‘Tis nothing thou hast done!
Thy claim comes from another’s blood, one more noble than any of us!
Gabriel Whitewolf 



Copyright 2013

"The Dreamer" by Lisa Crosby

The Dreamer
Girdles, corsets and petticoats
Wearing this crap really gets my goat.
What evil genius mind
Thought to make things that restrict and bind?
Even as I draw a breath
I fear the outcome might be my death.
But I must watch how I speak
And appear calm, demure and meek.
I need be proper and well-mannered and sweet,
And watch what I think, what I do and what I eat.
There are so many rules to follow.
It's a very hard pill to swallow.
For my family's sake and name
I dare not cause them any shame.
So I stifle my yawns at their droll conversation
And dream to be free in a new found nation.
Maybe this is the dream and someday I'll wake.
I don't know how much more of this life I can take.
But for now I close my eyes 
And imagine a place with wide open skies.
A place where not only the fowls are free
Where you can be you, and I can be me

~Lisa M. Crosby 
Copyright 2013

Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Victorian



February 6, 2013

Hello, writers,

Fourteen writers met at the Callahan library on Tuesday evening to share their words.    

One visitor attended.  Please welcome Tom B. to the group!

Please note CCWW will not meet on Tuesday, February 26 and Tuesday, March 5.  Our second six-week session will run from Tuesday, March 12 through Tuesday, April 16.

Here’s what happened…

We started the workshop with a choice of warm-up exercises.  I’ll list them here in case you want to do them this week:

                Choose one of the following prompts and write for ten minutes:

1.                  Describe your favorite car of all time.  Why is it your favorite?
2.                  Write about your childhood.  Was it too long?  Too short?  Sheltered?  Structured?
3.                  “Cherie looked at Delores with disgust....” Continue the story.
4.                  Complete a free-write on anything

After a few members read their warm-ups, we introduced ourselves, shared information and began the critiques.  

Good News and Information Exchange…

CCWW has started a blog.  It’s pretty simple right now, but we have plans to grow it as our group evolves.  Please consider following the blog.  Here’s the link:  http://callahanwriters.blogspot.com/

I (Nancy) started a blog about creativity.  I’ve challenged myself to complete at least one creative action each day for a year.  Please consider following my creativity blog.  Here’s the link:   http://thecallahancreative.blogspot.com/

Overview of critiques...

Connie W. started by reading “The Memory Box.”  Her piece chronicled the life of a debutante.  Her details and historical setting worked!  Matt Y. then shared a piece rich with Victorian setting featuring a character named Tristan.  Matt’s descriptions of the interior of the house worked.    

Connie K. shared a piece about her great-grandparents.  Her piece was full of historical facts as her characters faced the frontier of the West.  I (Nancy B.) then read a continuation of “The Party,” which I started last week using the hardware store prompt.  Members said my piece would work better if I added more internal thoughts of the characters.  

Shirley A. then read a humorous piece about Charles and Victoria.  Members said her use of clever phrases throughout the piece worked.  Lori L. shared a realization piece dealing with divorce.  Her use of metaphors (flea, cat, white fluff, etc.) worked well.      

Lisa L. read “The Dreamer,” a poem about women and their corsets on one level and about the freedom to be yourself on another level.  Everyone thought her piece and her British accent worked!  Michele N. then continued her romance novel.  Her syntax and her imagery worked well.  Betty C. read an informational piece on the Victorian era.  She skillfully combined the historical setting with people’s yearning for more independence.  

Oliver M. shared a piece written in a newscast style.  Members commented on the truth imbedded in his work.  Cameron S. then read “What Would I Do?”  Her piece answered questions about time stopping, a zombie apocalypse and other profundities.

Tom B. then read a piece featuring cultural contrasts.  His writing offered a perspective on our society.  Chad A. then read a historical piece on Queen Victoria.  Members found his writing to be informative.  Robert O. finished the critiques by reading “The Sleeping King.”  His poem had powerful rhymes and a literary quality.    

Links of interest…

Anybody interested in grammar?  This article offers a new take on nouns, verbs and prepositions!  More info here:  http://www.smithsonianmag.com/arts-culture/Most-of-What-You-Think-You-Know-About-Grammar-is-Wrong-187940351.html

“I’ll take a book with my coffee.”  Read about a new book machine.  Pretty cool! http://www.thomasnelsoncorporate.com/2013/01/harpercollins-christian-publishing-to-join-the-espresso-book-machine-network/

Entangled Publishing has loads of opportunities for writers.  Read their editors’ wish lists: http://www.entangledinromance.com/2013/02/04/wish-list-february-2013-edition/

New Writer’s Magazine targets new writers and seeks submissions.  Contact:  newwriters@aol.com, www.newwriters.com.  Looking for non-fiction, cartoons, fiction, fillers and poetry.  Submission guidelines here:  http://newwriters.com/submit.html

Mudlark: An Electronic Journal of Poetry and Poetics, a publication of the UNF Department of English, is taking submissions.  Submission guidelines on the web here:  http://www.unf.edu/mudlark/

Prompt for next week…

Prompt for next week is…stamps.  You’re free to write in any genre you like (poetry, non-fiction, fiction or drama).  If you’d rather bring a WIP (work-in-progress), please do.  

Please bring something to share with the group.

Until Tuesday, February 12, happy writing!

~Nancy