Thursday, March 26, 2015

Kind Dragons, Pink Guns and Broken Crayons



March 26, 2015

Hello, writers,

Our workshop on Tuesday, March 24, had equal parts laughter, insight and teen talk as we met at the Callahan Branch Library to share our words. Hopefully, we will be able to meet in the conference room again soon.

Meanwhile, this entry offers new information on community events, publication opportunities, critiques and weekly prompts.

If you weren’t able to make it on Tuesday, please come on out this week. We hope to see you on March 31 at 6:15 p.m.

Spoken Word Festival – Tuesday, April 28

On April 28 at 6:00 p.m., the Callahan Branch Library will host its second annual Spoken Word Festival. Since April is National Poetry Month, the library is hoping beat the poetic drum here in the Callahan community.

If you’d like to participate in the Festival by reading a piece (it doesn’t have to be poetry), please sign up with Callahan Branch Librarian, Alison M., or call her at 904-879-3434.

This year, the Library is planning to produce a booklet chock full of local writers’ pieces. Sales of the booklet will benefit the Friends of the Callahan Library. If you’d like to help put the booklet together, please let Michele, Lisa or Nancy know. 

Please consider submitting a piece or two for the booklet. Please watch this space for more details on word count, font size, formatting, etc.

The event is free and open to the community.

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Community Happenings

Callahan Area Show Theater (CAST) is now accepting acts for their upcoming talent show. Two shows are planned. The first will be Friday, April 17 at 7pm. The second will be Saturday, April 18, at around 2pm (time still to be determined). The group is also planning a two-week summer camp in June. Contact Brenda M. at cast2012@aol.com for more information.

Family Game Night - Tuesday, April 14, from 4:00 p.m. until 8:00 p.m. - Gamers of all ages are invited to play card and board games at the Callahan Branch Library! Some games will be provided by the library, but please bring a favorite game to share if you would like.

Second Annual Spoken Word Festival – Tuesday, April 28 from 6:00 p.m. until 8:00 p.m. (time is subject to change). Writers from all over the area will converge on the Callahan Branch Library to share their poems, short stories, essays, skits, etc. If you’d like to read a piece, please sign up with Callahan Branch Librarian, Alison M., at 904-879-3434.

Critique overview from March 24 CCWW

We started with warm-ups. I’ll list them here in case you want to do them at home:

1.      Sting operation at the Post Office
2.      Baby Blues
3.      New State of the Union
4.      A freewrite about anything

Butch K. began the critiques with a continuation of his soap box derby story. Members complimented his use of sounds (such as, “Kaboom!”) and his descriptions throughout the piece. Connie W. then read a prompt-based piece (“dragon who rescued the princess from the knight”). Members said her piece’s engaging tone, lovely descriptions (“rumbles like a soft purr”) and bedtime story feel worked well. Danielle T. then shared a piece featuring two friends, Dottie and Sherry, taking a walk on a five-mile forestry trail. Members said her piece worked well because of its dramatic ending as Dottie pulled out a gun after two prisoners blocked the ladies’ way.

Ines R. then shared another chapter of her WIP in which Alyson and Frank go to the creek for a picnic. Members said her descriptions of the food and the lake worked (“day into something fragile”). Richard N. then shared his revised first chapter of his first Dodge book. Members complimented his vivid verbs (“clouds cruised” and “sky blazed”) and his piece’s pacing. I, Nancy B., then read another chapter of my WIP. Members said my piece reminded them of an episode of “The Rescuers.”

Ashley T. then shared a first-person reflection piece about working with kids. Her metaphor comparing human beings to broken crayons God can use worked well, according to members. Lori L. then read a prompt-based piece (“What do I do? He’s been there all day!”). Members said the construction of her piece worked as well as her descriptions (such as “arms timidly became involved in his words). Cameron S. then shared a story set within a counseling session after one group member’s friend has committed suicide. Members connected to Cameron’s powerful portrayal of the aftermath of depression, especially her hurricane metaphor.

Matt Y. then shared a short story, “The Corruption of Sarah Giles.” From the “cyanide smile” to the “fingers [that] grazed as they reached for the drinks,” Matt’s piece resonated with group members. Ollie M. then read an editorial on our modern society. His use of irony depicting who’s truly free and who’s truly encaged worked well, according to members.

Wonderful writing, everyone!

Links of Interest

Spring 2015 WOW! Women on Writing Flash Fiction Spring Writing Contest

Stories must be between 250 and 750 words. Open prompt. Deadline is May 31. There is a $10.00 entry fee. Stories can be in any style or genre. A literary agent is the judge.


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Gemini Magazine Flash Fiction Contest

This contest seeks flash fiction entries of 1000 words or less. There is a $4.00 entry fee.


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The 2015 Ernest Hemingway Flash Fiction Contest

Stories should be 1000 words or less. There is a $10 entry fee. Prize money is awarded to winner. Winners and runners-up may have their pieces published.



Quote of the week:

“When you stop doing things for fun, you might as well be dead.”
                                                                                    ~Ernest Hemingway

Prompts for Tuesday, March 31

The first prompt is “A world where everything talks (cars, clothes, shoes, food, etc.).”  The second prompt is “The Dear John letter.” You’re free to write in any genre you like (fiction, drama, non-fiction, poetry, etc.). If you’d like to bring a WIP (work-in-progress), please do.

Please keep pieces to 1500 words or less and bring copies if you can.

Have a great week!

~Nancy B.

P.S. Is anyone interested in going through a book on writing and reading poetry over the summer? Nothing formal, just reading the book, writing poems and sharing them? Please let Nancy know if you’re interested.

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