Monday, March 23, 2015

Gravity and other stuff...



March 23, 2015

Hello, writers,

We had a wonderful writing workshop on Tuesday, March 17. Members’ writing ranged from realistic to serious.

This entry has new information on community events, publication opportunities and weekly prompts.

If you weren’t able to make it on Tuesday, please come on out this week. We hope to see you on March 24 at 6:15 p.m.

Spoken Word Festival – Tuesday, April 28

On April 28 at 6:00 p.m., the Callahan Branch Library will host its second annual Spoken Word Festival. Since April is National Poetry Month, the library is hoping beat the poetic drum here in the Callahan community.

If you’d like to participate in the Festival by reading a piece (it doesn’t have to be poetry), please sign up with Callahan Branch Librarian, Alison M., or call her at 904-879-3434.

This year, the Library is planning to produce a booklet chock full of local writers’ pieces. Sales of the booklet will benefit the Friends of the Callahan Library. If you’d like to help put the booklet together, please let Michele, Lisa or Nancy know.

Please consider submitting a piece or two for the booklet. Please watch this space for more details on word count, font size, formatting, etc.

The event is free and open to the community.

Piece of the Week

Here is Cameron S.’s poem from the March 17 session:

            Run on your little hamster wheel.
            Go ahead.
            Just keep running in the same continuous loop day after day, I mean, why not?
            You know it’s safe.
            There's no debris or danger on your little hamster wheel, oh no.
            You could keep running forever and be perfectly safe, and why wouldn't you?
            Stick to what you know. Excellent plan.
            Yeah, maybe there are bigger and better things out there.
            Adventures to find. Sights to see. People to meet.
            A world of excitement.
            But then you'd have to leave your hamster wheel. That could be dangerous. 

            You don't live for danger.
            So, no. Don't go explore. Why would you?
            Keep running on your hamster wheel.
            It’s much better this way anyway.


Community Happenings

Callahan Area Show Theater (CAST) is now accepting acts for their upcoming talent show. Two shows are planned. The first will be Friday, April 17 at 7pm. The second will be Saturday, April 18, at around 2pm (time still to be determined). The group is also planning a two-week summer camp in June. Contact Brenda M. at cast2012@aol.com for more information.

Family Game Night - Tuesday, April 14, from 4:00 p.m. until 8:00 p.m. - Gamers of all ages are invited to play card and board games at the Callahan Branch Library! Some games will be provided by the library, but please bring a favorite game to share if you would like.

Critique overview from March 17 CCWW

We started with warm-ups. I’ll list them here in case you want to do them at home:

1.      Ghostbuster for hire
2.      The wedding pawn
3.      The note left on your car…
4.      A freewrite about anything


[Added on March 25, 2015.]

Lori L., Michele N., Matt Y., Connie W. and Lisa C. shared their warm-ups with the group.

Richard N. shared information on Splickety Publishing (http://splicketypubgroup.com/). The publisher supports three imprints and hosts a variety of contests.

Matt Y. began the critique session by reading “The Muddle Mess of Jimmy Franks,” the second piece in his modern romance trilogy. CCWW members complimented Matt’s flowing dialogue and the realistic characters presented in his piece. Richard N. then read the latest chapter of his second Dodge novel. Richard’s storyline and continuing characterization of John and Vicki worked, according to members. Michele N. then shared a piece written from the perspective of a professional woman. Members loved the way she built suspense and showed the stealthy nature of modern electronic communications.

Lisa C. continued the session reading, “Grounded,” a prompt-based (gravity) poem. Members complimented Lisa’s excellent rhymes (such as “shenanigans/mannequins”) and the humor of her poem. Cameron S. then shared a poem about a hamster running on a wheel. Many members connected to the truth presented in her piece. (Her poem is posted elsewhere on this entry). Ines R. then shared a continuation of the third chapter of her WIP, “Caught.” She did an excellent job of including vivid descriptions (such as the mother drying her hands on her apron), according to members.

I, Nancy B., then shared a chapter of my WIP. Members said my piece reminded them of a show called Kid Genius on Lifetime Network. Ashley T. then shared a continuation of her WIP. Members loved her descriptions of fencing class and the school where the piece is set. Connie W. then shared a prompt-based piece (“I’ll kill you. Darling, I’m already dead.”) Members complimented the power of Connie’s palpable descriptions and the way in which she showed the effects of alcohol on families. Danielle T. then read “First Bicycle Ride of the New Year,” featuring her pink bicycle, Lulu. Members enjoyed the humorous details she included, such as her “angry posterior” and the “memory foam tractor seat.”

Excellent work, everyone!

Links of Interest

The Master’s Review Emerging Writers Contest

This publication seeks short stories up to 7000 words. Prize money and publication awarded. Deadline is March 31.


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Like to write essays? (I’ll keep this one up one more week as several members asked about it).

Ninja Essays is sponsoring another essay contest with prize money (Yay!) and no entry fee (Double Yay!). Topics and formatting instructions are listed on the site below.


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ArtAscent issues call for artists and writers

“ArtAscent” is currently seeking art and writing submissions on the theme, “Unknown.” Written submissions can be fiction, poetry and short stories of 900 words or less are accepted. Deadline is April 31, 2015.


Quote of the week:

“Writing is like giving yourself homework, really hard homework, every day, for the rest of your life. You want glamorous? Throw glitter at your computer screen.”

                                                                                    ~Ketrina Monroe

Prompts for Tuesday, March 24

The first prompt is “What do I do? He’s been there all day….” The second prompt is “The dragon who rescued the princess from the knight….” You’re free to write in any genre you like (fiction, drama, non-fiction, poetry, etc.). If you’d like to bring a WIP (work-in-progress), please do.

Please keep pieces to 1500 words or less and bring copies if you can.

Have a great week!

~Nancy B.

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