Sunday, September 14, 2014

Fine Print and Caves





Sunday, September 14, 2014

The rain may have kept some writers at home, but we had a wonderful group attend Tuesday’s workshop.

Warm-ups

The warm-up prompts are listed here, in case you’d like to write to them at home:  

1.                  Lost
2.                  The clumsy magician
3.                  Swamp fever
4.                  A free-write on anything

After a few writers read their warm-ups, we introduced ourselves and shared good news.  Richard N. entered his Dodge novel in a contest.  We’re proud of you, Richard, and welcome back!

Lisa C. is now teaching creative writing classes to elementary students at Sonshine Christian Academy (in addition to teaching middle and high school students). Way to go, Lisa!

Critiques

Lori L. began by reading a first person account of a woman meeting a man from Wyoming. Members said her descriptions of the man and his love for his lady worked well. Cameron S. then shared a continuation of her Sophie and Jack story. Members said her descriptions (“freedom and joy in her older brother’s dark eyes”) worked. Connie W. then read “Fine Print in the Cave,” a piece about Ariam Kiflemariam and her studies of cave paintings. Members enjoyed how well-written and informative Connie’s piece was.

Lisa C. then shared a true account of a caving expedition. Members said her realism and her word choice (“none of them had been cursed genetically”) worked. Thomas E. then asked Oliver M. to read a story continuation. Members said Thomas’s use of sounds (“footsteps echoed in 1-2 tempo”) worked. I, Nancy B., then read a chapter from my young adult novel. Members said my characterization worked.

Robert O. then asked Thomas E. to read a continuation of his “wedding bells” piece. Members complimented Robert’s pacing and descriptions. Richard N. asked Lori L. to read the first chapter of the sequel to his Dodge novel. Members loved Richard’s writing, especially his descriptions of Washington D.C. Danielle T. then shared a piece about aging. Members complimented her descriptions (“look in mirror and see our parents staring back at us”) and the thought-provoking truths about growing older her piece presented.

Matt Y. then shared a prompt-based piece (fine print) written from the perspective of a private detective. Members complimented Matt’s powerful writing (“cat hair stuck to her dress) and said they’d love to hear more. Oliver M. then shared two pieces-a sermonette about individual responsibility and a riddle. Members complimented the wittiness of his pieces and said they worked.

Wonderful work, everyone!
               
Links of Interest

National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo)

For those of you interested in writing a novel during the month of November, please check out this site. You can sign up, choose the amount of words you write each day and receive support from an online writing community.

Read more here:


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The Caregiver Story Contest

Here’s a contest about caregiving. There’s no entry fee. Deadline is Nov. 30.

Read more here:


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Write essays? Here’s a contest for you.

Here’s an essay contest with no entry fee. Deadline is Sept. 30.

Interested? Read more here:


Prompts for September 16

Prompts for September 16 are behind enemy lines and a false start.  Feel free to bring in a WIP (work-in-progress) if you’d rather not write to one of the prompts. Also, please keep pieces 1,500 words or less.

Quote of the week:

“Writing is like a contact sport, like football. You can get hurt, but you enjoy it.”
                                                                                                                   ~Irwin Shaw

Until Tuesday, happy writing!

~Nancy B.

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