Thursday, April 11, 2013

A dog in the manger



April 11, 2013

Hello, writers,

Twelve writers met at the Callahan Branch Library Tuesday evening, April 9.  Stephanie G. joined us.  Welcome to the group, Stephanie!  
    
Here’s what happened…

We started the workshop with a choice of warm-up exercises.  I’ll list them here in case you want to do them at home:

Choose one of the following prompts and write for ten minutes:
1.                  Describe your hands
2.                  Best and worst haircuts
3.                  Continue the phrase, “Fred had just added the last ingredient…”
4.                  A free-write on anything

Co-moderator, Michele N., led the group in sharing their warm-ups.  She then posted her warm-up on her blog, “Tales from the Tiara.”   If you’d like to read what she wrote (it’s about hair), please click here:  http://chelenoel.blogspot.com/.  After other members read their warm-ups, we introduced ourselves, shared information and started our critiques.  

Good News and Information Exchange…

Our Publication Party is next Tuesday, April 16!  Many of us have already submitted a piece (or pieces) of writing to a publication, an agent, a contest or a publisher.  If you haven’t, please consider doing so before Tuesday.  

In other news, I surprised my family with a new dog this past Saturday.  I adopted her from Animal Care and Protective Services on Forest Street in Jacksonville.  She’s a one-year-old Pointer/Labrador mix, and she’s very sweet.  We named her Harmony.  Here’s a picture:


Speaking of dogs, CCWW member, Connie W., still needs to find someone to watch her dog and her house for two weeks in May.  If you know someone who would be interested, please see her contact information in the e-mail I sent.  

Overview of assignments/critiques...

Lisa C. started the critiques with “Holiday Havoc,” a poem about being tardy taking down Christmas decorations.  Her rhymes, meter and visual imagery worked well in the piece.  I (Nancy B.) then continued by asking CCWW members to read my skit, “Barbecue.”  CCWW members said the humor in my piece worked.  Connie W. then read a piece about Mr. Swallow who shoots misshapen vegetables in his garden.  Her characterization and illustration of the prompt worked well.  Robert O. then read a piece in which a character searches for the light, but he awakens before he finds it.  Several members said his piece worked, but they wanted more!

Sandra H. continued by reading “The Disappearing Rabbit.”  She skillfully illustrated ‘dog in a manger’ by showing how one person ate another person’s chocolate Easter bunny.  Connie K. continued by reading a short poem in which a girl wants to drive a VW Beetle, but her grandfather holds the title to it. Members commented on how well Connie’s piece illustrated ‘dog in a manger’.  Karen D. then shared “Changes,” a powerful poem we all related to.  After hearing her piece, we commiserated with her over the loss of her daughter.  Thanks for sharing your writing, Karen.

Cameron S. then shared a story about a group of wolves led by Htead.  Her piece showed good characterization and conflict.  We hope you’ll share more, Cameron.  Suzanna then read a piece about a throne room.  Her vivid descriptions worked as did her set-up of the conflict between the knight and the man sitting on the throne.  Stephanie G. then shared “Un Chien dans la crèche or A Doggie in the Manger,” a poem based on the prompt.  CCWW members commented on the skillful way her piece brought the reader into the present-day and its hopeful tone.

Wonderful work, everyone!

Links of interest…

Poets & Writers Database of Literary Magazines Seeking Writing
You might want to spend some time researching this database.  Many publications are seeking fresh writing.  More here:


Highlights Magazine submission guidelines
Write for children?  Highlights accepts several genres of writing.  See more here:


Here’s a newsletter full of markets for young writers
You have to subscribe to the newsletter, but it’s full of great information.  More here: 


The Amelia Island Book Festival is almost here
This festival is held in Fernandina every year, and it’s coming up on April 27.  Debbie Macomber is the keynote speaker.  More here:

Prompt for April 16…

There is no prompt for next week, just a party and a chance to celebrate writing.  I do think we’ll have time to share where we have submitted our work, and we may take time to write down our summer writing goals.  

I’ll look at the calendar soon and plan our fall sessions.  We will most likely start our third year of workshops in late August or early September.

Blessings,

~Nancy

P.S.  CCWW is on Facebook!  Please join our Callahan Creative Writing Workshop page.

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