Sunday, January 19, 2014

Banana splits, Iceland and the red light in Callahan



January 19, 2014

Hi, everyone,

What a wonderful start we had to our first Callahan Creative Writing Workshop (CCWW) of 2014! Fifteen writers met and shared their words at The Sweet Spot in Callahan.

Thomas E., Jean L., James B. and Stephanie G. joined us. Welcome to all four of you!

In other news, we went to the circus yesterday afternoon with friends. As I watched each act enter the ring in their colorful costumes, I wondered if the circus employs a traveling seamstress. What a fun job that would be! Then I started listing circus-related article ideas I might pitch to a magazine editor. Fun stuff!

Meanwhile, here’s a recap of our meeting last Tuesday and a few links of interest.

This week’s warm-up

We started the workshop by choosing a random word from the green dish and writing about it. Author Ray Bradbury said he often did word association exercises to generate ideas for stories.

I’ll list a few of the words here in case you want to ‘word associate’ at home.

Closets                                   Hot Tea                 Marriage
Lace                                       Watch                    Diamonds
Calendar                                Floral                     Rain
Montana                                T-shirt                    Swing
Stapler                                   Spatula                  Carpet

We then shared a few warm-ups, introduced ourselves, shared good news and reviewed critique guidelines.      

The critiques

Richard N. began by reading another installment of his novel. Most of the men in the group said they enjoyed Richard’s descriptions of military uniforms and equipment. Jean L. then read a piece published in one of the Chicken Soup for the Soul books. Group members commented on her realistic teacher concerns and her use of flashback and flash-forward techniques. Thomas E. then shared a compelling first-person piece about a person waking up in a hospital. Members commented on his skillful use of sounds (i.e. footsteps) in the piece.

Cameron S. then read a first-person piece about Jerry, a cat with issues. Members audibly chuckled when they learned Jerry had separation anxiety. I, Nancy B., followed by reading a continuation of a young adult story. Bruno’s “lithp” garnered several positive comments. Connie W. then read the fourth part of her rope story set in Ireland. Comments complimented Connie’s descriptions, such as “meanness in his dark eyes” and the ring being passed down from mother to daughter.

Stephanie G. continued the session by sharing “Doin’ the Splits,” a piece set in a Callahan ice cream shop. Members complimented Stephanie’s use of all three prompts as well as the humor she included. Connie K. then shared “Emily’s Secrets: Long Saturdays,” a continuation of her ongoing work. Her piece skillfully showed the effects of an alcoholic father on his wife and kids.  Lisa C. continued by reading a poem about an alarm clock. Through the use of rhyme and humor, her poem ended with the clock hitting the trash can on a Saturday morning.

Oliver M. then shared a piece written to one of the prompts. In his piece, a driver daydreams about a banana split and a time machine while stopped at a traffic light. Michele N. continued by reading a continuation of her Jenna and Jackson piece. Her elevator setting and diction (i.e. “admonished”) worked well, according to group members. James B. then shared a nightmare piece that turned into a prayer. Members said his realistic vision of being stabbed worked well.

Robert O. continued by reading a revised version of his Gabriel Whitewolf story. The view of homelessness Robert’s piece presented worked well. Kaitlyn S. then read a continuation of her dream collection. Members commented on the swamp, the amulet and the reappearance of the two Emily’s. Matt Y. ended the session with poetry. His poem presented history from a different perspective, and it worked very well.

Excellent writing, everyone!

Links of Interest

Freelance writing
Interested in freelance writing? I have found it to be a wonderful way to earn income. Here is a link to oodles of writing jobs. More information here: http://www.freelancewriting.com/freelance-writing-jobs.php

Literary writing
Want to find a market for your poems, short stories or plays? Check out this database maintained by Poets and Writers. There are more than 900 publications currently seeking work! More information here: http://www.pw.org/literary_magazines

Writing contests
I love entering contests because they keep hope alive! Maybe you want to enter a contest this month. Here’s a database listing several current writing contests. More information here: http://www.be-a-better-writer.com/creative-writing-contests.html

Information for next meeting

Our next meeting is scheduled for Tuesday, January 21 at 6:15 p.m. at The Sweet Spot.  We looked into moving back to the library, but their meeting room is unavailable. The two prompts for Tuesday are hurricane and in the teacher’s lounge. Feel free to write to one or both prompts. Of course, if you’d rather bring a WIP (work-in-progress), please do.

You’re free to write in any genre (fiction, non-fiction, poetry, drama, etc.). Please keep pieces to 1500 words or less.

Until Tuesday, happy writing!

~Nancy

P.S. I'm including a couple of photos taken by Stephanie G. Thanks, Stephanie!





Saturday, January 11, 2014

The Sweet Spot

Saturday, January 11, 2014

Just wanted everyone to know the address for The Sweet Spot. It is located at 45075 Page Street in Callahan. Zip code is 32011.

Here is a link to their Facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/thesweetspotcallahan

Looking forward to seeing everyone on Tuesday evening!

~Nancy

Friday, January 10, 2014

Prompts!

January 10, 2014

Hello, everyone,

We're looking forward to starting the first session of CCWW on Jan. 14 at The Sweet Spot in Callahan. We will start promptly at 6:15 p.m.

Please bring a piece to be critiqued. You can either bring a WIP (work-in-progress) or a piece written to one of the prompts listed below.

Here are three prompts for Jan. 14. Choose one, two or all three!

Prompts:

1. "I was sitting at the red light in downtown Callahan."
2.  Iceland
3.  Banana split

See you Tuesday!

~Nancy

Friday, January 3, 2014

New Year, New Location



Friday, January 3, 2014

Happy New Year!

I hope you’re enjoying the cooler weather. With such a short winter in Florida, the cold is refreshing!
Are you ready for two new sessions of CCWW? I have enjoyed our break, but I’m looking forward to meeting on Tuesdays, fresh writing in hand.

CCWW has added a new moderator, and she is Lisa C. Congratulations and thanks to Lisa for stepping up and shouldering some of the load. Lisa offers a wealth of talent and new ideas for the group. Thanks again, Lisa!

Meanwhile, we have met with the owner of the new bakery in Callahan. Her name is Tammy, and her shop is called The Sweet Spot. It’s located directly across the street from the Callahan Branch Library behind The Hair Center. After talking with Tammy, we have decided to hold our first spring session of CCWW at The Sweet Spot.  We will decide where to hold the second spring session in a few weeks.

Dates for the spring sessions are as follows:

  First Spring Session:
  Tuesday, January 14
  Tuesday, January 21
  Tuesday, January 28
  Tuesday, February 4
  Tuesday, February 11
  Tuesday, February 18

  Second Spring Session:
  Tuesday, March 11
  Tuesday, March 18
  Tuesday, March 25
  Tuesday, April 1
  Tuesday, April 8
  Tuesday, April 15

We are limiting both sessions to 15 writers. Please e-mail Michele, Nancy or Lisa to RSVP for one or both sessions. In addition, please plan to be a fully-functioning member if you sign up. This means attending each Tuesday evening of the session and bringing fresh writing with you each week.
We are looking forward to seeing all of you on Tuesday, January 14 at 6:15 p.m.

~Nancy

P.S. By the way, The Sweet Spot offers sandwiches and soups in addition to baked treats. We’ll post their menu here on the blog next week. You might want to come early and eat before we meet.

Monday, December 9, 2013

Resolutions, anyone?



December 9, 2013

I don’t know if you’re the type to write New Year’s Resolutions, but I’m penning a few reading and writing resolutions this year. In fact, I just wrote 10 of them. I’m going to print them and stick them on the fridge with one of my Elvis magnets.

Just thought you might want to write down your resolutions, too. Maybe we could share them here on the blog and keep each other accountable. What do you think?

One of my reading resolutions is to keep a list of the books I read all year and comment on them. I started doing this on Goodreads a few years ago, but I am trending more low-tech these days. I’m choosing pen and paper over anything digital when I can. What about you?

Stan and I enjoyed hosting the CCWW Christmas party last week. The food and the fellowship were wonderful. I enjoyed hearing everyone’s pieces!

We talked about moving CCWW from the library to the new bakery across the street. Please let me know your thoughts. Of course, you may need to try out the bakery a few times for research purposes. That’s what I plan to do!

Meanwhile, we start our first spring session of CCWW on Tuesday, Jan. 14. A new co-moderator has joined Michele and me, and she will start in the spring.

More details soon.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

~Nancy B.


Saturday, November 23, 2013

Bullfights, symphonies, gnomes, parsley and there's a new bakery in town!



November 23, 2013

Hello, writers,

Happy Saturday! I’m glad it’s the weekend.

This morning, Stan and I bicycled from our house in Spring Lake Estates to the railroad tracks on River Road and back. We heard several trains on our way to the tracks, but we didn’t see any pass when we got there. Have you ever biked through Callahan?

Also, Hayden and I visited the Sweet Shop, a new bakery in Callahan. It’s located across the street from Callahan Barbecue. We enjoyed doughnuts, cinnamon rolls and strawberry rolls before school Friday morning. Perhaps we need to have some writing workshops there?

Meanwhile, here’s the recap of the last two writing workshops, one on November 12 and one on November 19. Also included is an overview of our critique session, links of interest and information on our holiday party.

Warm-ups

We started both workshops with a choice of warm-ups. Then, we wrote for 10 minutes. Here are the warm-ups:

From November 12
1.      In line at Starbucks…
2.      In cooking class…
3.      At the shooting range…
4.      At therapy…

From November 19


1.     Yarn or twine                                   6. The firefly dragon
2.     Plaid or polka dots                          7. The hoppity-hop bunny
3.     Bottled water or tap                        8. The pretty old queen
4.     Riding mowers or push mowers       9. The rainbow horse
5.     Describe your opposite                    10. The love, love fairy

                                          ~Numbers 6-10 submitted by Hayden, age 5


A few of us shared our warm-ups. We then introduced ourselves, shared good news and started our critique session.

Critique overview from November 12 workshop

Robert O. began the session by reading the prologue of his Gabriel Whitewolf piece. Several members commented on how well he used both figurative and literal storms. Kaitlyn S. continued her dream story. In this segment, we learned about two girls named Emily and counting sheep. Members said the humor and the authentic teen voice in Kaitlyn’s piece worked.  

Connie W. then shared “Bullfight Symphony,” a piece set at the St. Louis Opera House. Her newsy writing style and information on the opera, “Carmen,” worked. Cameron S. then read a continuation of her story featuring Jack and Lucy. Members said her descriptions and story line worked. Lisa C. then shared a stream-of-consciousness piece about putting together a puzzle. Members said the piece could be taken on a couple of levels. (Turned out Lisa really read Lori’s piece. Ha ha! Good joke, ladies)!

Richard N. continued the session by reading another part of his ongoing novel. Many members commented on his skillful use of description and plot. I, Nancy B., then shared “At the Symphony,” a short piece about a man and woman going to a concert. Members said they would like to hear more. Lori L. then read, “I’m a Gnome,” a poem. Members said the rhymes and the suspense in the piece worked well. (Lori actually read Lisa’s piece)! Matt Y. continued the session by reading “Econowar,” a commentary about corporate America. Members said his voice and humor really worked!

Critique overview of November 19 workshop

I, Nancy B., began the critique session with a piece written on the “parsley” prompt. Members said they liked my simile comparing tasks to train cars. Kaitlyn S. then shared a continuation of her dream story. In this section, Charlotte and Michelle found themselves in a large house with a living clock. Members commented on the creativity of Kaitlyn’s piece. Michele N. then shared more of her story featuring Wyatt and Katherine. In this section, Katherine confronted Wyatt by telling him she would not “be a slave” to his whims! Members said her story flowed, and it reminded them of the movie, “Titanic.”

Robert O. then shared a revised Gabriel Whitewolf piece. Members commented on his skillful use of description and second person pronouns. Connie W. then read more of her Irish piece. In this part, we saw Aidan prepare to apprentice with the town rope-maker, Leary. We also learned Colleen will probably work as domestic help in a neighbor’s home. Members loved Connie’s piece, especially her use of vivid phrases like, “snuggled into his father’s side.”

Lisa C. continued by reading the poem, “It’s What’s For Dinner.” Her piece, featuring an arrogant chicken, took place at a chicken farm. Members said her rhymes and her humor worked very well. Matt Y. finished the session by reading a prompt-inspired piece. In it, a girl goes to prison for stabbing her boyfriend 214 times on Valentine’s Day. Members said Matt’s piece, though violent, worked well in pacing, wording and plot.  

Great writing, everyone!

Links of Interest

Database full of writing opportunities

Poets & Writers Magazine has updated their database of literary magazines and journals seeking work. Please consider spending some time searching this database. You may find a home for some of your work.

Read more here:

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Memoir Contest
Good Housekeeping and Shebooks are sponsoring a memoir contest. Deadline is Dec. 15.  
Read more here:   
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‘Every Mother Has A Story’ Memoir Contest
Here’s another contest sponsored by Good Housekeeping and Shebooks. This is the one I mentioned at workshop a few weeks ago. Deadline is also Dec. 15.
Read more here:


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In need of prompts over the break?

We’re scheduled to begin workshops again on Tuesday, January 14. If you need writing prompts between now and then, here are a few places to look:

                http://www.writersdigest.com/prompts

Also, if anyone wants to meet over the break, please let me know. We could always have a write-in at the new bakery in Callahan. Did I mention how good their coffee is?

Holiday Party

Our CCWW holiday party will be held Tuesday, December 3, at my house from 6 p.m. until 9 p.m. I’ll prepare a main dish. We passed around a sign-up sheet for side items, drinks and desserts. Hope you and yours will plan to come and bring a holiday-inspired piece of writing.

I sent a flyer to everyone via e-mail on Saturday. If you did not get one, please let me know.

Thanks for great workshops this fall!

~Nancy B.

Tuesday, November 19, 2013

Prompts, anyone?

November 19, 2013

Hi, writers,

I'm a tad behind posting last week's recap, but I will do it in the next day or two. Meanwhile, the prompts for tonight's workshop are parsely and at a chicken farm.

Hope to see you tonight at the library!

~Nancy